This spring the green is wild,
profuse and supreme, exotic and extant
- the white cane chair
left on the lawn
seems to float in clovery billows.
Over a mower's roar
and the whispered conspiracy of the wind,
the children's voices
are cheerfully elemental
like the clatter of rain.
Painted shadows tangle, restless and involuntary;
and dancing grass tips gesture and curtsy;
shuffled leaf-piles quiver timidly -
a choreographed colour spectrum
as perfectly conglomerate as an artist's palette
or the piling silver of a waterfall.
We are the blind but chaotic worms
joining fearlessly, ignorantly in
with the spinning clock of seasons...
the layering of the earth,
the measured perfection of decay.
terrific, all the way through: exquisite; if I had to pick: the last stanza, stunning and that line ‘the piling silver of a waterfall’: never knew how to describe that sight, but you’ve nailed it!
I am re-posting this as an entry for EIF Poetry Challenge #16 – Nature Poetry. I feel like nearly all my poems use nature in their imagery and so I am using an old one. I hope that’s allowed.
This is so beautiful and vibrant and lively and excellent! The last line is brilliant.
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Thank you. That means a lot. I really didn’t know what I thought of it when I posted it.
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terrific, all the way through: exquisite; if I had to pick: the last stanza, stunning and that line ‘the piling silver of a waterfall’: never knew how to describe that sight, but you’ve nailed it!
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Thank you! Such lovely comments!
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I am re-posting this as an entry for EIF Poetry Challenge #16 – Nature Poetry. I feel like nearly all my poems use nature in their imagery and so I am using an old one. I hope that’s allowed.
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