Coy as raindrops
secret on the window
secret on the leaf belly
sneaking
glistening
haunting from within
Then pounding chords
and smattered drums
a thunderstorm incarnate
it rumbles
sexy chocolate
like a hug that doesn't slack
Now run me over
with fairy steps
ingenious and tapsy
dance light
intricate web
such soft and perfect feet
We're slowing now
we're aching now
the ghosts of ends are here
hold, breathe
this yoga pose
a final, glowing ember of sound.
Maybe. š¤·āāļø. He was happy to take all the blame for not getting it. Poetry isn’t his forte but he’s very generous in listening to mine on a regular basis. And most of it he has some kind words for. So I guess you win some, you lose some.
You created a beautiful flow with your wonderfully descriptive words here. Well done.
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Thanks. š
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Music is soooo hard to describe and yet you did! I love the last stanza especially the yoga metaphor.
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Thanks. I am glad you felt it worked. My husband didn’t connect to it at all. š
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One must have a deep love of music and words to get it I think.
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Maybe. š¤·āāļø. He was happy to take all the blame for not getting it. Poetry isn’t his forte but he’s very generous in listening to mine on a regular basis. And most of it he has some kind words for. So I guess you win some, you lose some.
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