Mountain shrouds rising behind trees’ black, dead-armed scream. River’s rush below. My tears are for the wombats... all wildlife who starved or burned
My first attempt at a Tanka – a Japanese poetry form explained by Ingrid at EIF.
Mountain shrouds rising behind trees’ black, dead-armed scream. River’s rush below. My tears are for the wombats... all wildlife who starved or burned
My first attempt at a Tanka – a Japanese poetry form explained by Ingrid at EIF.
images clear, effective, forceful: a terrific tanka !!
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Thanks!!
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I like the way you picked yourself up, dusted yourself down, then got onto the horse of poetry again 🙂
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Ha ha ha. Long training in getting back on the horse. 😉
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oh dear; glad it turned out all right 🙂
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Oh, this is poignant: hit me right in the heart! Thank you for your entry 🙏
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Thank you!
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