Along a winding dirt road
on pebbles slick as ice
the tyres describe a skater's arc
blackly. But it's his scream
from which echoes tumble
like the driving rain
and mountains cover their ears
with the sinking sky -
slinking, hunkering, slumping
against the horizon.
Does the tree shiver
invisible as reason
in the eye of his frustration?
The fender is frowning
against the prevailing shoosh
of crumpled radiator
and raindrops on hot metal
He limps, holding himself up
with his fists, clenching the air
beside his hips, painfully.
In the car's mouth, the tree waits
for sufferance or salvation
and the man, beside his steaming friend,
seems to do the same.
powerful stuff, esp the brilliant image which ends it !
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Thanks. Glad you like that last bit. I wasn’t sure about it.
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