last night
the ocean was not deep
crimped with sand bars
and an eel's whiskered mug
shot behind an elopement of grey
i snorkeled
surfacing often to measure
my distance from the shore
adrift in time, or so it seemed,
in a dowdy eloquence of grey
i prefer
the nights when I plunge
past the grip of Mars' steady blinking
to the clandestine trenches
into the darkness - the magnet of grey
and then
to come up spluttering
surprised by the silvering
bubbles of yesterday rising
through the moon-smile, the merest sliver of grey.
What a beautiful and mysterious time to snorkel. I love this.
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Wow. The last stanza caught me off guard. This is excellent.
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Thank you! š
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dowdy eloquence of grey…brilliant!
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Thanks! š
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some great imagery here; love ‘the magnet of grey’ and the surprise of the last stanza: ‘the silvering bubbles of yesterday’ š
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“bubbles of yesterday rising
through the moon-smile, the merest sliver of grey.” – this is so beautiful
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Oh good!! Thanks!
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