In the night sky my ink is strewn pricked through by the glittering inconsequence of stars. As much as high I live way down below where sea creatures hold their own lanterns or erase eyes entirely - the black pupil no match for my mastery. I arrange myself in mirroring shapes beneath the trees or follow people enjoying my talent at mimicry. Some say I am not a colour I am the space from which all colour has been vacuumed and yet by the very absence of those brightly hues I define them and give them strength.
Written for dverse poets’ challenge – write from the perspective of a colour
eerie and effective,and a little mysterious with some startling images ! my favourite line: ‘the glittering inconsequence of stars 🙂
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Stunning descriptions. Black has a calming voice throughout, but sets us straight.
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This is great! Love this…
I live way down below
where sea creatures
hold their own lanterns
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You are too modest. I love this poem of shadowy blackness. It stalks but it also leads. 🙂
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absence of color, perhaps… but not absence of meaning, as you highlight in your beautiful poem!
lovely!
-David
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Thanks! 🙂
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I loved the idea of being able to vacuum out colour…
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A lovely second poem about my favourite colour! I love the depths of the second stanza, especially the lines:
‘where sea creatures
hold their own lanterns
or erase eyes entirely’
and the defiance of these lines:
‘I am the space
from which all colour
has been vacuumed
and yet by the very absence
of those brightly hues
I define them and give them strength’.
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Thank you. Such detailed feedback. Thank you.
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Perfect! Loved the lanterned fish and the philosophy!
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Beautiful! I too loved ‘inconsequence of stars.’ which has a Shakespearian ring to it!
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This is exquisitely drawn! I love; “my ink is strewn pricked through by the glittering inconsequence of stars.”
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The power of the color black is very nicely showcased in your poem!
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I arrange myself
in mirroring shapes
beneath the trees
or follow people
enjoying my talent
at mimicry.
This section captured the black of shadows wonderfully — well writtdn!
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Thank you
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I enjoyed this
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Oooh this is fabulous! Such majesty and power evoked. This poem deserves a few reads through. I love the images of the bottom of the ocean and the fish holding their own lanterns
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Oh thanks. I really wasn’t sure what I thought when I posted it. But everyone has been so kind about it.
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I also love how you described shadows. This poem is one of my favourites of your recent ones.
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Cool! Thanks!
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I love that first stanza. You did black up right.
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