I am re-posting this as an entry for EIF Poetry Challenge #16 – Nature Poetry. I feel like nearly all my poems use nature in their imagery and so I am using an old one. I hope that’s allowed.
This spring the green is wild, profuse and supreme, exotic and extant - the white cane chair left on the lawn seems to float in clovery billows. Over a mower's roar and the whispered conspiracy of the wind, the children's voices are cheerfully elemental like the clatter of rain. Painted shadows tangle, restless and involuntary; and dancing grass tips gesture and curtsy; shuffled leaf-piles quiver timidly - a choreographed colour spectrum as perfectly conglomerate as an artist's palette or the piling silver of a waterfall. We are the blind but chaotic worms joining fearlessly, ignorantly in with the spinning clock of seasons... the layering of the earth, the measured perfection of decay.
This is a beautiful poem and very much in keeping with the theme so of course you are welcome to enter 🙏
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That last verse is a standout to me. I love it. It’s kind of a bit bleak where as the rest of the poem is so pretty
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Is the bleakness good or bad in its stand-outishness?
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Oh sorry. You did say you loved it.
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It’s good and it jarring. It flows well
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NOT jarring.
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Oh good. Glad it’s not jarring. 🙂
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This beautiful poem is well worth a second outing.
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Thank you. A lovely comment.
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and deserved!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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I love the restless exuberance of this, even to that startling line, ‘the measured perfection of decay’ 🙂
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What an honour to gave got third place! Thank you!!
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