Further to John Malone’s post “True Colours: the Story behind No Sympathy…”
The guy I knew didn’t commit murder. But sometimes I wonder what’s worse.
In the office his generous laughter, round and round and round it went infectious as violence. I liked him as much as anybody who saw his door that day the blue and white police tape. And the loss of his name. Tap tap tap the guard and him down a corridor. Did he ever picture fitting himself onto one of those narrow prison cots? Tap tap tap. Online everybody is anonymous. He thought he was meeting a teenage daughter of somebody slouching against suburban concrete waiting with his backpack of inappropriate dreams. This day the net is sprung, complete with those uniforms standing crisp in the sun. BANG Doors slam shut. Hundreds. BANG Thousands. BANG Office. Cell. And all those hearts. crack, BANG In the office we went back to our computers. Tap tap tap. A silence… round and round and round it went.
Wow. That must have been quite a day. I like your examination of the offender and the damage done.
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Thanks. It was many years ago now but I still think of it often. And him. The contrast of the person I thought I knew and the image of him in prison.
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I wonder what on Earth serial killers partners make of it when they find out the truth?
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Hell. I heard a bit about this guy’s wife. She was horrified, furious, devastated, shamed… pick a negative emotion and I think she had it. So awful.
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Yes, it’s quite possible she didn’t have a clue and what a horrific revelation!
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Heck of a story. Sometimes these guys have families. Imagine being that kid! Just awful!
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Yes. Awful.
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disturbing story, well told, and the fall out from such behaviour is wide and deep 😦
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Yes. So wide. And so long lasting.
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That last paragraph with the description of getting back to work while knowing what everyone was thinking, but not saying aloud….your writing is so powerful
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Thank you so much! 💕. I appreciate your comment!
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This poem is a shocking as it is readable and believable not gratuitous or glamorised. A difficult thing to achieve given the topic and emotions involved.
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THank you. It went through so many edits.
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