my knitting brought to light red, navy & tan four years stuffed in a soft bag - his unfinished blanket her little son so quiet who slept breathless before his brow ever saw daylight
Seguidilla written for dVerse
my knitting brought to light red, navy & tan four years stuffed in a soft bag - his unfinished blanket her little son so quiet who slept breathless before his brow ever saw daylight
Seguidilla written for dVerse
Loved this! You nailed this prompt. Cheers!
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Thank you. ♥️
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I looked up the website; you certainly have nailed it 🙂
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Thanks. 🙂
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Poignant! ❤
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Thank you. 🙂
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This poem captures pain and molds it. I am humbled.
Yours,
David
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A very generous comment. Thank you. ♥️
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Oh that is so heartbreaking. Hoping it is pure fiction. You nailed the form.
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Sadly it’s not fiction. It was a blanket for the baby of a friend of mine. It was so awful for her. And I haven’t done any knitting since. But I think I must find my way back. She has twin girls now. Still grieves for her little son but at least she has the sweet girls too.
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My condolences to your friend and to your sorrow as well.
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💕
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Such a poignant seguidilla, that brought a tear to my eye and reminded me that I have a jumper to knit for my grandson.
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Thank you. ♥️
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Such a sad little poem, skillfully crafted.
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Thank you. 💕
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Incredibly touching and poignant. Beautiful write.
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Incredibly touching and poignant. Beautiful write.
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Many thanks. ♥️
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This is a beautifully crafted poem …. thank you for sharing.
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Thank you.
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