it's not a dream
on a cliff path
standing tall & tense
the slip of gravel
its pinging fall
to that darkness
out of sight to all
except closed eyes
why am i here?
like all dreams
it's just an arrival,
walking through
a loophole I never
remember
like all dreams
here is not a time
nor a place
it's a liminal conjuring,
a feeling
found in pictures
but it's not a dream
This is very eerie.
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Eerie. That’s a good word for my state of mind. Thank you. You wrote my whole poem in one word. π π
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be careful of walking through those loopholes: you never know where you’ll end up: Narnia or Fantastica ……
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Argh! You’re scaring me! You know how attached I am to this dimension! ππ
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sorry π loopholes fascinate me too π
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βLiminal conjuringβ – I like that! Intriguing poem…
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Thank you. π
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Made me feel like I had accidentally wandered into Lennon’s 9 dream. A bit of fun.π
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bowakawa pousse pousse?
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That’s the one!
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Never heard of it. π
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Know the feeling. Having very strange dreams too.
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