These myriad drops tapping my jacket soaking my jeans, and the propped dog legs akimbo, shakes from ears to tail progressively. Tying my shoelace, the knot oozes water like a squeezed rag; I remember last night’s moon arcing through gauze the wring of light.
Challenge from Mish at dVerse:
Write a poem of exactly 44 words, not including the title. Include the word “knot” in some form.
it is the last line that fulfills the promise of the poem 🙂
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Interesting comment. Thank you. I was pleased with the word play. 🙂
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You nailed that shaking dog perfectly. Well done.
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😀 They have it down to a fine art, don’t they?
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Hehehe! They sure do!
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That’s exactly what I was going to comment on, Hobbo! I loved it! ❤
Sincerely,
David
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🙂
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Yes, it was so accurate!
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You painted very descriptive images of the dog and the laces – I could easily see both.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Oh my… such a creative angle! You wove this well.
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Thank you. Or tied it. 😉
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From something as quotidian as a soggy dog walk to the sublime light of the moon – lovely!
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Thank you! I will have to look up quotidian. 🙂
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Amazing what you can do with so few words. It always takes me at least 1200 to get where I’m going! Well done, I loved this.
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Thank you. That’s very kind! 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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It seems from your Crapper Rap poem you have flooding issues? The shoelace knot oozing water does not sound fun. Poor doggy! 💕
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Lol. Yup. Our house flooded (plumbing fault) on December 29. Yesterday the garage flooded (lots of rain). So it’s all water water everywhere and never time to think. 😉
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Yikes! Houses can be a pain. We just bought one a few years ago after renting and moving around with the Army forever. We’ve had our fair share of problems as well. Keep your chin up (and wear some platforms) this too shall pass! 💖
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Thanks. 🙂💕
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This was a delight to read!
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Thank you! 🙂
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I can really feel how wet it is… they call it dog weather here, but it sounds like not even dog was too happy about the rain.
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😊 dog weather. I like it. Here we relate it more to ducks. 🦆
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Propped dog is such a good phrase. And I loved the last few lines about the moon. This poem is so neat and jam packed with images and excellent sounds
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Thank you ❤️
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A skillful depiction of the moment. I could see it clearly, especially that soggy shoe-lace, and then the shift to the moon. Such a lovely contrast.
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Thank you. 🙂
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The ring of light, along with the nighttime light, makes this quadrille very memorable.
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Thank you. 🙂
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