It’s raining still, the clouds glub grey and we kids are chasing puddles the skid and skim of clay brown mud at the end of the road Mum comes hunting, hair flat and thick face tight like a gate slammed shut she’s looking for me, her voice quiet at the end of the road She leads me to the goat’s tether to the carcase ripped bare by dogs my little pet, my Christmas friend at the end of the road I’m running now, the ache inside bigger than my ribs can hold blowing out my nose, monsoon bile at the end of the road Face down to the blue bedspread in the cool hum of air-conditioning my hiccoughs like a drowning cow at the end of the road And Mum’s hand on my hair, softly her words a blur. Like skidded puddles, my clay brown heart, softly leaking at the end of the road.
Written For Mindlovemisery’s Sunday Writing Prompt: “At the End of the Road”.
I really enjoyed your take on the prompt. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with us.
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Ok. Cool. Thanks for telling me. I am a bit of a technical dunce so it’s always a relief to know I haven’t been stupid. 😆. Thanks for reading my post.
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I know a lot about being a technical dunce.
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🙂
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The emotion attached to the vivid imagery interplay’s we’ll with the water and mud found at the end of your road. It’s heart wrenching to read and moving. Well-done!
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Poignant! Sad! Clever! True?
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Yes. A vivid memory.
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Thought so. It reads like it was!
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A tragic tale told so beautifully! Well written!
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Thank you. 💕
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Excellent write!
Thank you 🙂🦋
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Thank you! 💕
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You’re very welcome! 🦋
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I’ve seen rabbits and chickens torn apart like this: hard savagery; knocks one around and there’s always blame to lay and guilt to feel : you capture it well —
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Thank you. It was awful
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Beautifully written, but oh, how terrible!
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Thank you. 💕
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Well written…
I particularly like the way the line ‘the skid and skim of clay brown mud’ bounces along….
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Thank you. 🙂
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