this frame my window
captures the spillage of the inverted half moon
the splashing fall of silver-green sepia
on grass and tree crown and verandah rail
and the hulk of the concrete rainwater tank
and the innocent motion of the breeze
and the hum from way down there
of the season-swollen river
and its rush to be somewhere
else but the many holes of incorrigible black
the gaping patchless maws of blindness
into which the dog stares hackles like fences
along his small white back. His long high yell
wakes me like a fire alarm, out of the words
of another poem, into his fear and warning
I try to tell him itβs probably just the alpacas
but he is disappointed by my stupidity
and rushes off to bark through other frames
so, awake, I write this instead
This is excellent!
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You frame this poem cleverly and with just a limited view give us so much to see and experience. Excellent.
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Very good…..
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some great images here, falling into and out of poetry —
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You captured that spooked dog perfectly. I loved this poem.
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Wow. Wow. … Wow.
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