Everyone seems to be writing amazing sensual poems this week. This is was an attempt at a sexy poem (not my usual genre). It was written many years ago after I attended an apple festival (of all things) just out of Melbourne. It was a fascinating event and very pleasant too.
Ah sweet caramello dude come to me with kisses on this rain grey afternoon. Granny smiths glisten globes of glow echoing instruments magical and spectacular. Let this trumpet sing for you mellow as warm chocolate sauce. Sunday. It's jazz time, honey. Like bees, the sax croons to produce this syrup this sweet floaty tongue-sticking stuff. Cox's Orange Pippen. Like the drums, man. Like the drums the rhythm beats in you sexy boom smiley boom marching man. Hey soldier boy, hold THIS rhythm with your thumbs between my shoulder-blades like wings of eagles crack and soar Golden Delicious.
Sensuous use of the Apple names. A jazzy Sunday, indeed. Enjoyed the chocolate and caramel.
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Thanks. π
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I like this: crisp and refreshing!
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Thanks. π I have kept it all these years so I guess it’s good to feel my faith in it isn’t unfounded.
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The swing in the words and form are mesmerizing here! Loved the Golden Delicious ending! π
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Thank you! π
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As sweet as apple pie! Well done.
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This is a great poem. I don’t usually think of apples as a sensual food. I mean, I like them, but don’t think of them the way I think of rich chocolate, you know? But you gave me a new appreciation here!
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