under the plane trees leaves kiss lips brown with long summer swinging where the piles are deepest, children raise reckless chaos faces collapsible in mirth suspended russet plummets like eyelashes flirting, resting a moment rakish & Bohemian on a head of curls and then a breeze (or specious jaguar?) arches its patchwork spine in colourful ripple and the children are joyously consumed
Written for MLMM Wordle #237
Words: Kiss, Eyelashes, Long, Bohemian, Raise, Deepest, Plummet, Reckless, Jaguar, Specious, Collapsible, Colorful
You move in and out of magical and luscious, realistic imagery. The Jaguar of autumn, lively, as well as the brown kidding leaves.
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Thank you! It was a fun list of words to work with. 🙂
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faces collapsible
in mirth I love that!
The imagery in this piece is almost edible it is just so vivid.
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Thank you! 🙂
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some wonderful images, kinetic verse, love ‘like eyelashes flirting’ —
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Thanks. 🙂
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I am fascinated by your term “kinetic verse”. Perhaps there is potential verse in that! And what about centrifugal verse? 🙂
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kinetic is one thing, centrifugal is something other; now you’ve got me intrigued: I can’t imagine what centrifugal verse would look like; let me work on that one 🙂
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Yes. I realized as I wrote it that centrifugal is not a type of energy. But I still loved the idea of it. Can’t wait to see what you come up with.
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I will try, ‘Worms;, I will try 🙂
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Autumn is my favorite season, although I always hated going back to school.
~cie from poetry of the netherworld~
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