It’s Friday evening and the masculine sky is built thick with steroidal clouds muscling out the tops of awed sky-scrapers. Contrasting snow like cherry blossoms chases the piquant wind while umbrellas like bent and splendid crepes admit colour in splashes as commuters battle through the park. Two girls, gripping insecure scarves attempt to exhume a large golden retriever from a hedge of sticks where a bunny tail took shelter moments ago.
Written for MLMM’s wordle #239
Image from Pexel Images
you can almost feel the weather flexing its blustery biceps; some lovely and lively vignettes; I love the tripartite structure
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Thank you! What a wonderful, detailed response. 🙂
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I loved the poem; I read it three times so I could give a considered response: the poem deserved it 🙂
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😊
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go, doggy, go!
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Lol. You don’t like bunnies? 🐇
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What a lovely poetic description!
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Thanks. The clouds outside the hospital window started me off. But the rest was sheer fiction.
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The odd subliminal word like steroid creeping in. Not surprising under the circumstances!😊
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Ha ha. So funny what ppl connect. I connect steroids with gym junkie blokes. I realize that steroids are used in medicine but it never occurred to me that it was subliminal messaging. 😃
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🤣 Very true. People see different things. A bit like looking at a painting,
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Thanks for the nod, but your MLMM link should be
https://mindlovemiserysmenagerie.wordpress.com/2021/05/03/wordle-239/
not mine. Love your poem and I’m glad you’ve linked it to Yves original post above.
Have a great evening.
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Oops. Sorry. 🙂 And thanks.
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No problems at all. It was a good poem!!
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I love that personification of the sky as a big tough man. It’s so different from how we typically think of the sky, and I think the image really works!
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Thank you! 😊
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Crepe umbrellas, brilliant. Also, love the masculine scene that stats this poem. Creative and refreshing.
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Thanks so much. 🙂
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