it's after six and we head into the autumn night dog on leash kids on edge "it's so dark! I can't feel my feet!" aside from the fingernail moon surging upward twixt a meander of clouds the street lights are on, coning through shimmering foliage splattering colour and lacework shadows caress the hollow blue-black meeting of bitumen and gutter. they run ahead the dog's little paws flashing staccato beside the flourish of their laughter the fall is inevitable the smack-thud of it as his shoe clips the deceptive dark it stows a pebble (never softly) in the palm of his hand I hold the leash kiss his forehead and rub his knees the cold air transpires thinly around us and the dog's tongue waits limply
This poem was written for Mindlove Misery Menagerie’s Wordle #245
Words: Shimmer, lace, Hollow, Fingernails, Stow, Limp, Flourish, Blue, Transpire, Meander, Never, Caress
a neat narrative wrapped in some effective imagery 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, John. Another draft from late April worked up to a wordle. I started with the first two stanzas tonight. 🙂 It’s not a strong plot.
LikeLiked by 1 person
but it is a neat narrative 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Fingernail moon…inspired!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Really enjoyed this poem 🙂 You used the words in really interesting ways!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!! I so appreciate you reading and commenting. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful! I love that “so dark I can’t feel my feet” 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks. 😃. I loved that line too. Kids say the most wonderful things.
LikeLiked by 1 person