It is no lie that the scrunched fists and inexpert fingers which carved shapes respresenting language, wrought the shapes from privilege causing materials and education to come at a price beyond the common hut dweller. Secrets and power, bore out, stamped and sealed with gold kept for selected audiences. They took their blocks and then their quills and they wrote the world,
their slender wrists ignorant of poverty or labour And now in hallowed motherboards the same wrists hold sway as though we haven't evolved at all Meanwhile the creeks clog and the wildlife choke and the poor starve among flies and disease and pandemics flow easy as water but in their ivory strongholds nothing has changed. Not even the fear of losing it all.
Submitted to Earthweal’s Open Link Weekend #73 July 4th, 2021
Very clever, and that line ‘pandemics flow easy as water’, wow. Also very true, even today. Important documents are written in legal jargon designed to confuse the masses and give a sense of importance to the privileged few who translate this nonsense!
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Amen to that
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I absolutely love this!
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Thank you!!! π
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A really interesting perspective!
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A good statement made in thisππ»
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This is so wise. I am so impressed. I loved it.
David
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Thank you!! π
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Thanks, David, for your kind words. π
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a powerful diatribe with an evolutionary perspective —
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Diatribe… I must google that word. To my mind it speaks of a rant. “A powerful and bitter attack…” Okay. I guess that’s right. I didn’t like the idea of ranting. π. I wrote it in three bursts. And I read it to P before posting. I wasn’t confident of it.
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it works well π
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Thanks, John.
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Writing as a privilege and a selective high society. I can see the tight fists trying to keep in all the traditions and stop the evolution of language. Great poem with a powerful image of the pandemic and then the worry of losing it all. Even if there is no humanity left to enjoy the pompous works of literary geniuses. Vive la rΓ©volution littΓ©raire!
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“As if we havent evolved at all” – that is the astonishment I feel all the time – with whole towns burning down in B.C., not one word about the climate crisis, the high temperatures that started it all – trying to explain it away as man-made. Denial is alive and well among those who govern. Maybe they dont have a clue what to do. Easier to pretend it isnt happening. So frustrating. A powerful write.
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Thanks Sherry. It’s awful how little we seem to be able to do to affect change. π’
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Smart write. Language itself was a product of nature, but the symbolic shift with written language meant world internalized and possessed. And so the gap formed. The technology raced forward but the human animal failed to evolve. Well done — Brendan
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Thanks.
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just literate enough to buy stuff online, operate machinery without hacking ourselves to bits, and observe Stop signals. but that’s about all the ivory-wristed want from their loyal minions ~
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Sadly accurate I suspect. We are good for keeping their economy afloat.
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