At 7am the sky is streaks apricots and indigo a dash of gold and the wash behind of translucent milky blue 7:01 gold invades every streak ripening silhouettes deepen the northern horizon a flat heap of indigo gentle and quietly bruising 7:06 we're awash in dank mustard and over there in the pummeled north the first crisp light stings the tree tops a frontal attack sharp and sure 7:14 like daylight is a fading the whole palette swipes again washed watery blue just a skitter of citrus a promise from the sun 7:21 great bleeding shafts of lemon peel dulling the background to monotony any yellow leaps from the landscape ecstatic 7:25 and then it's gone shuffled to the back of a grey cloud pack this wet winter's cumulus stack
The other morning, when the house was quiet, I sat and watched the sky evolve into daytime. I was fascinated by the mood changes. I noted it all down. I have amended my notes a little but it’s basically as it was. A record of sunrise.
Beautiful poetry painting lovely imagery. Lovely
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Thank you! π
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Your descriptions are just SO GOOD!
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Thank you!
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How cool to have this record in poetic form! The imagery of the changing colors is so lovely
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Thanks! π
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The precision of the timings, contrasting with the whimsy of the imagery, works really well.ππ
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Thanks Hobbo.
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You’re welcomeπ
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I love how you organized this. What a great idea!
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Thanks, Bob.
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Gorgeous write.
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Many thanks
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great imagery; and I like the structure: vignettes over short stretches of time sky watching: my favorite line: ‘a skitter of citrus’ !!!!
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Thanks John. π. Glad you liked that line. You’re a careful reader. I appreciate that.
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Just stunning Worms!
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Thanks! π
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Stunning! What a fabulous description of sunrise. How did you dream up so many ways to describe colour!?!
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Thank you. π
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