I found a notebook from which trumpet song tanned my skin and let me breathe deep the golden sense of persimmons their voices (those poets) never wrinkle, even as pages yellow and my knuckles collect scars. echoes preserved in paper cathedrals splicing the all and nothing of experience poetry our human whale-song
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Blooming beautiful!👍
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Oh really?? Thank you. I’m relieved. It took significant shuffling.
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Oh that’s beautiful – every line is wonderful.
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Thank you!! 😊
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Fab. Particularly like “echoes preserved in paper cathedrals”, and the images it conjures.
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Thanks, Misky. 🙂
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I could feel that deep breathe in the beginning, lovely!
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Thanks, Tricia! 🙂
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Just beautiful.
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Thank you, Lindi!
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The whole poem is beautiful, but the line, echoes preserved in paper cathedrals, that’s just out of this world.
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Thanks Bob. I am so glad you like it. It took me a lot of reworking to get to that line. 😊
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nicely put, Worms: love the line ‘their voices never wrinkle’ 🙂 and ‘paper cathedrals” which I missed on first reading: magnificent metaphor
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Thanks, John. 🙂
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I think that’s what we hope from all our poems, Worms: that our voices will not wrinkle 🙂
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Lol. Yes. I was rather pleased with that line. Some messages are definitely ageless.
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Ahhh, Worms, this is absolutely beautiful and it’s a wonderful homage to aged poems/poetry (some sadly can be forgotten, so that’s why I love the entire idea of this piece giving respect to these poems all at once). You delineate a respect and grace of time-worn pages, but with voices as ethereal and eternal inside our minds in their impact. May that alone never fade as you are right, it is one of the songs we should hold close and listen carefully to as humans.
I especially adore these lines, I could feel it wash over me with the imagery:
“the golden sense of persimmons
their voices (those poets)
never wrinkle, even as pages yellow”
Mesmerizing.
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Thank you Lucy. I am so glad you enjoyed it. The notebook I found was a real treasure that I barely remember compiling with Lorca, Neruda, Emily Bronte, Issa, Leonard Cohen and many others. It was so lovely to revisit.
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