Soldiers
(and not only you)
they may lie
before you die
they may lie again
when
your speechless
body is in earth's pouch
the close, dark hug of it...
your life given
for a cause...
not yours.
Lies are the wounds
in all our histories
suppurating as tiny texts
in little known museums
or finding voice
in deep-digging authors.
Truth like pus, the
ooze of an aged infection
scarring the eyes
of your descendants
with yellow dis-ease.
love the word play in this, the ruminations on ‘lie’, a questioning of the martial spirit, its costs and losses; especially topical with the West’s withdrawal from Afghanistan —
Yes, the poem actually evolved out of a conversation with Brendan under my poem “How it might’ve been”. I went off on quite a rant. But rants are always the things you feel strongly about.
love the word play in this, the ruminations on ‘lie’, a questioning of the martial spirit, its costs and losses; especially topical with the West’s withdrawal from Afghanistan —
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Yes, the poem actually evolved out of a conversation with Brendan under my poem “How it might’ve been”. I went off on quite a rant. But rants are always the things you feel strongly about.
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for sure; it had a bit of Wilfred Owen in it, but that was about a long ago war — still ‘the beat’, as Cher says, goes on 😦
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🙂
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A strong poem about us humans so easily seeking conflict even with enormous cost.
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Thanks, Ulle.
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Powerful, poignant and pertinent. 👏👏👏
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Yay! The three ‘p’s!! 😊
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Wow. This is a STRONG poem, Worms.
❤
David
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Thank you, David!🙂
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