It was said that all things must pass: the big wheels turning, turning over the drought-lands, the down-and-out lands cattle skeletons ploughed in like rotted ships fence-posts - frayed and far-fetched zippers - dragging lines of wind-sawn wire – dun and drear the fierce fires rolling, roiling wanton flames - the lunge and buck, the rear and roar of raging wave-forms Foam of heat, cloying, dumping skimming and spitting – a race of hate. Grimmest grandeur. the weary warriors’ fighting, toiling yellow uniforms drab with dirt Every home for winning, losing – fought by hearts for free. A thousand small and savage Thermopylaes faces bled in forge-furnace sepia – done in, done up, dull as dust. The fulsome clouds spewing, spoiling drowning in fallen sky – nights that suffocate hessian-brown and hard-inhaling. The hingeless flap of funereal flotsam – tree pieces, possum fur and the torn-out holes of sand-blasted hearts. Wrung and wretched raining But what about memory? Seared in, branded. Singed skin and sewn-on stories. The stink still there in winter’s friendlier fires – a chimney’s tale of facts, of fear, of friends, of flocks and fortunes. “Lest we forget” this fiendish inferno. A nation’s collectors Philatelists of fire.
Photo courtesy of Mr Worms who was one of the warriors
Written for Brendan’s Earthweal prompt “big wheels turning”
I have posted this somewhat impatiently. I think the line breaks may need changing?
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You captured the rage of the fire in these words. Fire fighters are the modern dragon slayers and this is a fantastic ode to them. That picture frames it perfectly.
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That’s a great analogy, Ulle!
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I love all the alliteration here – reminds me of Anglo-Saxon verse in a way. Deep and epic and very much on-topic!
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Thanks, Ingrid. 👍💕
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It’s good. Thanks to Mr Worms and others like him. No thanks to those who don’t hold the hose.
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Indeed. I had a line in another poem (which I haven’t left on my blog) about not holding the hose/ ‘cept the one that the urinal knows.
I hope he at least takes that much responsibility.
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It was the fires, stupid!
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😂
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I can’t better Ulle’s analogy: a fitting tribute to a fearless warrior caste 🙂
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Thanks, John. 🙂
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wow and amazing! a fearless and strong piece incredibly well written.
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many thanks, lindi!
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You are on a roll with this one. Excellent piece, a fitting tribute to a fine body of heroes, and compliments to Mr worms on a fine photo. 🙂👏
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Mercy buckets. 😂😂. Another appropriate tribute. But seriously, thanks Hobbo! Glad you liked it.
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A fitting tribute to all those fighting fires, and will continue to do so.
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Thanks, Bob.
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You capture the horror of bushfires well. I know what you mean about memories being triggered. I lived in Gippsland during the 2009 Black Saturday fires. Every time I see images of wildfire my mind flashes back to that day.
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Thanks Suzanne. Those black Saturday fires sounded totally horrific. The 19/20 fires were the nightmare I remember. And then it was floods and then Covid and (in writing the poem) I was thinking about how the media moves on and nothing much more is said but that the scars are still there in so many landscapes, homes, and hearts. So even if it feels like the collective consciousness has moved on, there’s still this undercurrent that will be there for decades… maybe generations depending on the level of trauma.
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Very true. It is this dark undercurrent that we need to work with for true Earth healing to occur – well at least that’s how I see it. It’s a theme I keep coming back to and that I am working with in the novel I am attempting to write at present. Your comment inspires me for the day’s work that lies ahead of me – thanks for sharing your insights.
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Oh good luck! I so admire you for working on a novel. So far I have been too chicken to put pen to paper. 😂.
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It’s a crazy way to pass the time. Sometimes I wonder if I’ll finish it. 🙂
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A terror of wheeling fire, seared into the landscape and memory … There is a new or more intense emotion in the culture where the great fires have burned, a sense of dread as the season approaches again. Fine iteration of remnant particulars that spark that emotion (as Ingrid commented, the alliteration gives this the rowing ferocity of “The Seafarer”) — I was arrested by “the hingeless / flap of funereal flotsam – tree pieces, possum fur /and the torn-out holes of sand-blasted hearts.” In Australia, wildfire crews are largely volunteer, are they not? A different stake for them than with paid crews (though in the US, prisoners are now also being wheeled to the task) — and for witnesses like yourself, who are not small in number and must now face the coming summer staring into hearth fires as here. The wheel is hemispheric – how it burns now in the North, how it will again as the horizon shifts. Searingly done and thanks so for bringin’ it to earthweal.
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