it’s when the blossoms dare
to stand in bold opposition to
that military dome
it’s when raindrops cling
like a Southern Cross
to the webbed needles of a casuarina’s fork
it’s when feathers and wood
rattle with the flight of birds & their songs
are held aloft by scaffolding clouds
it’s when the concrete path gleams
secretive as silk; supine
to the narcissistic sky
it’s getting home to the smell
of cooked apple and wet dog
and the warm, yellow clutch of electric lights
Thanks, John. I was determined to post something last night despite eyelids drooping. The kids, the dog and I had been for a lovely dampish walk. So that was what I had to work with. 🙂
I love that last stanza.
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Thank you 😊
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Wonderful. Especially like the second stanza.
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Thank you. 😊
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🙂Beautiful. Apple and wet dog pie. My favourite!
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😂. Canberra tradition
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😂 Yummy!
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neatly structured poem, wonderful images; love the warmth of that last stanza —
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Thanks, John. I was determined to post something last night despite eyelids drooping. The kids, the dog and I had been for a lovely dampish walk. So that was what I had to work with. 🙂
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it came through beautifully, soothing 🙂
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Love the scaffolding clouds; this one has so much uniqueness and beauty. Wonderful.
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Thank you!! ❤️
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Gorgeous imagery and language
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Thank you❤️
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