
On some days in my Lockdown exercise hour the sun has poured its soothing ink quietly like warm milk between still trees and the roads have lain empty as snakeskin between closed houses. And even the birds seemed awed by the largeness of silence. But other days, the madding wind flips my lid and every oval offers up a yell or a ball or a frenzied skitter of yesterday's litter. And I relish the life, the action, the noise. Even although the silence was as smooth as the white-bellied brittle gums, it was also eerie as though this virus is a muffle and our voices have turned inward trying to find our inner landscapes where the echoes are pleasing. Are they ever pleasing?
Written for Sanaa’s “Dungeons & Derivatives” dVerse prompt.
I took this quote βThe trees are mad silhouettes against the rouge pink sky; perhaps they too need emptying.β β A pocketful of maybes
And I used a derivative of the word Madding and the blockage is noise although I realize that I haven’t really emphasized that in the poem.
It’s belated because home learning depletes a brain already depleted by my treatment and writing during the week just seems impossible. Luckily today I had 2 hours at the hospital and was able to corral a few brain cells.
Wow. You have summed up the vagaries of lockdown perfectly here. I live opposite a suburban footy oval. It has turned into a moody place. Often there is only one lone human and some little dog braving the wind, other times all I can hear is the constant pounding of footballs on the turf.
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Yes! It’s weird! We live opposite an oval too!
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Who would have thought the local footy oval would ever become such a strange, haunted place!
Here in regional Vic Lockdown 7 ends at midnight. Thanks goodness. This last one has been very strange. I kept getting lost in the emptiness. I hope you come out soon. Lockdowns are definitely not good for people.
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I love the eruption of moods, esp the line ‘the madding wind flips my lid’; love also that haunting shadow which reminds me strangely of the outline of the French Lieutenant’s woman standing on the headland looking out to sea —
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Thanks, John! π I love that comment. I feel I must now read the book so I can live up to this shadow image.
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it’s a book that everyone must read at least once; I may now read it again; that really is a haunting image of you out in the garden —
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I love the contrasts in this,
warm milk between still trees
frenzied skitter of yesterdays litter.
Beautiful writing at your talented best.
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Thanks, Hobbo!! π
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You are most welcome! π
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I love “empty as snakeskin”. I mean, it’s just brilliantly descriptive. And well done for managing this prompt. I couldn’t figure out what I was supposed to do.
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It is a bit of a tricky one. I got my best tip from reading the explanation Ingrid put at the bottom of her poem.
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Iβll give it a shot this afternoon. π
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I am so glad you like the “empty as snakeskin”. It was my favourite line as I wrote it. π
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I love this haunting poem, especially the concluding question. I think if we can find a place where the echoes are pleasing, we are doing well!
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Thanks, Ingrid. I am glad that line rang true with you. It did with me but not all things translate.
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This says everything about the weather and the mood over the last week. Superbly written.
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Thank you so much!! π
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You have enveloped the essence of the day and its ever-moving shadows
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many thanks
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snakeskin roads, stellar imagery.
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danke schon!
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Lock down, quarantine, days on end … I felt each mood as you wrote it … beautifully.
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many thanks!
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We have not been through any hard lockdowns, but we have certainly changed a lot by working from home and never leaving the neighborhood… it will be almost two years before things get a little bit more normal.
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yes… it’s certainly a long haul.
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This is incredibly poignant! I especially resonate with; “Even although the silence was as smooth as the white-bellied brittle gums, it was also eerie as though this virus is a muffle and our voices have turned inward,”.. thank you so much for writing to the prompt ππ
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