I’ve never found a four-leaf clover yet
to wave around as evidence of luck;
that’s not to say I feel at all bereft.
Still, in patches, my hopeful eyes gets stuck.
When hairy clouds leave dandruff on clover
it glitters – zirconia - but soft and round.
The leaves bedazzle - dainty flakes all over
Then individual leaves sweetly resound -
I’m glad to leave them glowing in the ground.
Written for Laura's dVerse #Novelinee Prompt
A Novelinee is a 9 line poem with 10 syllable lines and a strict rhyming structure. It should be in iambic pentameter.
It’s a pedestrian poem. 😂 In two senses. The poem of a pedestrian. And also, my brain is just barely functional. Even as I posted it I thought I might delete it. Probably should.
I should make it clear: ‘A pedestrian start’ was praise; it’s a good way to guide the reader into the poem where the writing is elevated; some of the best poems have pedestrian starts: the reader is not intimidated; pedestrian does not mean cliched writing; it means plain spokenness —
what a charmingly observed novelinee – and that final line nicely compliments the opening
p.s. I shall always think of this when looking at clover patches from now on
a pedestrian start. I had to look up zirconia but you’ve enriched the poem with its presence 🙂
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It’s a pedestrian poem. 😂 In two senses. The poem of a pedestrian. And also, my brain is just barely functional. Even as I posted it I thought I might delete it. Probably should.
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no, Worms; the poem stands up well; let it go; I’m a fine one to speak but give it its time in the sun 🙂
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🙂
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I should make it clear: ‘A pedestrian start’ was praise; it’s a good way to guide the reader into the poem where the writing is elevated; some of the best poems have pedestrian starts: the reader is not intimidated; pedestrian does not mean cliched writing; it means plain spokenness —
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Oh thanks, John. I always think of “pedestrian” as ordinary or boring.
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it sort of says, come walk with me; I have some interesting things to show you —
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🙂 well, that’s a much nicer interpretation.
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Sweet; sparkly clover next for leaf one I find I may pass over.
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❤️
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ooooooooooh. this is magical and enchanting, Worms. ❤
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Thank you!! 🙂
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truly elegant, Worms.
❤
David
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Thank you! Very kind of you!
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lovely. I enjoyed that.
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Oh, how nice! Thank you!
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what a charmingly observed novelinee – and that final line nicely compliments the opening
p.s. I shall always think of this when looking at clover patches from now on
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Wonderful stuff. 🙂
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Thank you! I am honestly surprised at how lovely everyone is being. 🙂
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You are welcome. You deserve it, honestly!
BTW I haven’t forgotten about the publisher. I will give you an update if I hear anything! 😊
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Great! I look forward to hearing! 😁
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Me too! 🙂
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I can only imagine!!
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“When hairy clouds leave dandruff on clover”…what vivid imagery! Love this.
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thank you! So glad you liked it!
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You are so welcome.
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I love the way you show respect for this humble flower! I especially like the use of ‘zirconia’ as it gives a lovely flow to the poem.
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Thanks Ingrid! 🙂 Lovely feedback.
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🍀
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I love the line, Then individual leaves sweetly resound… Well done!
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Thanks, Bob. So glad you liked it.
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Lovely–such a beautiful observation of nature!
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Thank you Merril!
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Clouds leaving dandruff on clover, now that’s an image to conjure with!
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I have stopped looking for them… and I think if I ever would find one I would let it be.
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