Like the moon how its blushless circle turns sun’s dread glare back in silver wonder… so watch the papadam grow proud against slam fisted heat.
Written for msjadeli’s dVerse Open Link Night #293 prompt. (Belated)
Edited 3/10/21
Like the moon how its blushless circle turns sun’s dread glare back in silver wonder… so watch the papadam grow proud against slam fisted heat.
Written for msjadeli’s dVerse Open Link Night #293 prompt. (Belated)
Edited 3/10/21
Striking imagery! I especially enjoyed the final stanza. I can’t see the post on Mr Linky: you can still link up to dVerse!
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Thanks, Ingrid. I haven’t been using Mr Linky the last couple of weeks. I haven’t felt up to doing my part with all the comments on others so I thought I would make use of the prompts and promote dVerse with my link but not worry about Mr Linky at this stage.
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Ok sorry: I didn’t mean to pressure you! I know it can be a lot of work keeping up with all the comments 😅
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No pressure taken. 🙂. I know you were just being friendly. ❤️
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😊
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I love the last stanza 🙂 🙂
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Thank you! 🙂.
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Brilliant food metaphor. I’m with everyone else on the last stanza. When did they stop being verses and become stanzas btw? 🙂
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There was a great court case – stanzas vs verses. Everybody got confused about versus and verses and verses got a bad name. Kind of sad. But one stanza is still a universe so that’s good. 😊
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🤣🤣 If it was a stated case, the next case stanza falls by the result I suppose!
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🤣
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A verse can be the entire poem (or a stanza) whereas a stanza is a group of lines, but never an entire poem. It’s enough to make a person a dizzy.
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😯. I didn’t know that.
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Thank you Misky. I’m such an ignoramus sometimes! 😂
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I read that as *iguana* 😂😂
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🤣🤣
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I adore your phasing. It’s so clever and fresh.
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Thanks!!
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I love the first stanza, the image of the papadam. I cook them in the microwave, but I still watch them swelling and stretching out.
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