Abstraction #Miz Quickly

abigfatcanofworms Personal Reflection, poetry October 4, 2021October 6, 2021 1 Minute

Written for Miz Quickly’s October 3 Prompt (Sadistic Laughter from the Rabbit)

composition 1

this door, with nose and eyes
slams silently, and her the letterbox
with silent space for communication;
her need drips off him, the puddle 
staining the carpet around his chair

composition 2

banana slices in her breakfast
the round soft shock of them
potassium thick as honey and
the blonde roll of yoghurt
to ease the slide.  sweetened duty.

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Published October 4, 2021October 6, 2021

4 thoughts on “Abstraction #Miz Quickly”

Misky says:

October 4, 2021 at 9:14 am

I love love love the second one.

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1. abigfatcanofworms says:
  
  October 4, 2021 at 9:35 am
  
  Thanks Misky! I feel abstracted. 😀 I hope you don’t mind but I couldn’t resist following “Poetic Bloomings” as well. I don’t want to copy you but you find good prompts! Expect an Edward Hopper picture shortly.
  
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  1. Misky says:
    
    October 4, 2021 at 9:36 am
    
    Of course I don’t mind. I love your company.
    
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Ron. says:

October 4, 2021 at 1:57 pm

I agree completely; you nailed the prompt. I love it all and esp admire the accusatory silence. Thanks.

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