By the time you get to the concrete bridge (once aged wood and musical bolts) the road noise rumble is settled firmly in your ear canal and the car seat long stopped being comfortable. It’s a dirt road now, trimmed with teenage gum droop and you ride the roller-coaster of turns and dips, past the old quarry where we stopped to piddle and the kids discovered a maze of golden orb webs like star-centred gates between the black trunked trees. And there’s that great apple box forever dropping its brittle bones onto the road. You take the left at a fork, through a gateway and wizz along on beaten sand. Over a cattle grid near the higgledy piggledy letterbox queue and then around a gully with smattered farm buildings and past the rust-streaked hay shed in its squat sureness. You will wind down your window now because you're going more slowly and the wide spaces beg for your nose. Then with a splash, you’re amongst willows, knee high kikuyu, the burp of frogs, the pop of crickets and a glut of sometimes-creek puddles. You’re almost there now, just the long sweep upward over swales and cattle pats to “the locked gate” where you must get out, figure out how to unbend your hips and knees and drag the gate to open. And then, please, just stand and look where you came from all that rolling grass leading your eye into a mural valley with pale-edged sky resting so lightly on tinkered verdigris hills The gold snake road slips away, a pretty perspective, and the vast cool dome of nothing, invites you to breathe slow as the mountains. Perhaps they are the drivers who just never climbed back in.
Written for Miz Quickly’s “All the Best Places” prompt (Oct 6)
rich, evocative imagery, especially enjoyed the aural ones. good as any Les Murray employed; the last two lines are haunting
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Thanks, John. I have been doing a lot of very cut back poetry lately. I thought I would let myself loose with a more narrative style. I had to trim it. Lol. It was as enthusiastic as a bamboo hedge.
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Lol; the narrative style works: it tethers the images 🙂
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I was just starting to think, this sounds like a one-way trip.
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🤣🤣
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Well, that was a super afternoon out. I enjoyed our little trip together, feel quite refreshed now!
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Glad to hear it. 😂. When I was at Uni, it was a good 3.5 hours to that point. Gosh it was good to get out of the car there and just breathe. Especially on a winter night with a gazillion stars pricking the blackness and your breath like dragon smoke.
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I felt like I was right in that car with you 🙂
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What a lovely journey. ❤️
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It is indeed. 🙂❤️
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Oh, this is so good!!
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Thank you!! ❤️
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