In taut arabesque and sterling trim you hold the light. Pointing leaves exalt your luminescence, moth-quiet, whispering “manna manna”. You show me elegance in the rain. Resilient dancers, your merry tutus sway ivory tendrils in canopy’s sunlit pantomime. And then, cocky-flung and homeless, you celebrate rebirth: the gates to soil’s womb.
Written for Miz Quickly October 14 Prompt
Some sort of plant (single or collective)
OR animal
OR a parent and child
OR a pair of lovers—observed or imagined
Using one of these topics, write a poem of two five-line stanzas. The two will present some of the same information, but in different ways. For instance: lovers seen from a distance/the sensation of holding hands. A squirrel’s eye view of an acorn/a deer hunter unpacking a sandwich. Panorama/closeup. Different senses. Male/female. No judgment, no conclusion, just presentation.
You’ve described this tree so very well. Nice one.
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Not that you didn’t present it perfectly, but (being unfamiliar with the tree itself) I did a Google Image search which only magnified my admiration for your wondrous verse. My hat is off.
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Thanks, Ron. They are beautiful.
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Introduced me to a new plant. Lovely tree.
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🙂
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