(a hen)
she is black in the way that a green flame burns black and in the way a night sky is radiant and on her breast flecked feathers, fringed with fawn slip against each other seductively in the garden she steps onto a brick, extends a scaly claw behind her and each wing downwards, tip-feathers separate in quivering stretch in this way she conjures beauty from ungainliness; extracting mystery from colour and grace from function
Written for Miz Quickly’s Oct 15 Prompt “Write about a particular bird”
delightful: my partner used to raise roosters and hens — I’ve written a few poems on this topic, esp one called ‘Meg’ — but the enterprise grew dispiriting after one fox attack too many π¦
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I can imagine. My parents lost two chooks to wedgies last week.
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‘wedgies’ ?
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wedge tailed eagles
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ahhh; thanks: foxes with wings π
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π I guess so. Except I think the Wedgies got here themselves. Unlike the chickens and the foxes. π So I give them extra quarter.
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Regal and magical.
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thank you! she is. π
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From what you say, we had one same breed (our first gen chucks were pure breeds) and she was indeed gorgeous. That kind-of midnight mint colour isone of my favourites.
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Ah yes. I think she’s an Australorp.
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What a lovely description Worms. We love all things black in this house. DπΎ
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Ah yes, Dauphy. We once knew a beautiful black Labrador called Hannah. She was so glossy and handsome. Black is indeed beautiful.
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Thank you, Worms! πΉπΎ
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That first stanza is exquisite.
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Thanks Misky! That’s the stanza I like best too. But I really want to figure out a better ending.
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outstanding
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Many thanks!
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This is beautifu – exquisitely well observed. We keep Australorps too – gorgeous birds.
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Thank you Lindi. I really appreciate your comment. π
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