From where I stand, washing dishes in a rectangular plastic tub, I can see the roiling approach of buff-shouldered clouds – a bellicose sky. A shard of lightning rips a fierce line down the purple horizon and I flinch, searingly aware of my metal watch. I take off all my jewellery and put it in my bag. I pack up the dishes and the tub, moving quickly, desperately.
He is under the car, probably glad of the cool edge to the moody wind gusts which flick hair into my eyes and increase my anxiety. The empty tent flaps ominously on its slatted platform.
“I think we should get off this hill,” I tell him when he emerges. To my relief, after a glance out westward, he agrees. We pack the car hurriedly and drive to a lower point, hunkering there through hail and sheets of driven rain. The storm bares its too-white fangs over and over. I hug my jacket and stare at the luminous dials on the dash, listening to the car roof get its drubbing.
In the morning the desert glows a new shade of red and the scrub is alive with glistening droplets. We head into Hermannsburg where the cop tells us we won’t get to Uluru through the national park today. The Finke River is flooded.
Desert sand sucked up a red and knotting scarf the falling purple sky entwines
Written for dVerse Haibun Monday prompt “Fear”
Very atmospheric👍👏
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Many thanks!
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Scary 😧!!
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It was scary at the time! But afterwards, it’s an adventure to be talked about. 😀
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That’s always the way, isn’t it.
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Described so well.
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THank you!
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The colors are fantastic, worms. Love the wet hands and the flooded river, amidst these beautiful colors. Could read again and again to enjoy new elements, I’m certain.
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Thank you. 🙂 You are very kind.
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You’re most welcome.
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you pack a lot of turbulence into this; well written: sharp and incisive !
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Many thanks, John.
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A great story. A true tale with embellishments?
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Not much embellished. I’m terrified of lightning.
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