Sunday’s voices:
the distant chainsaw
of fly’s buzz;
the metronome
of grasshopper tick
I lie here
flat on my back
this lumpy grass -
an effortless masseuse.
I hear river frogs
plucking their
loose stringed chorus,
and watch against the sky
the underbellies of insects
balanced at the centre
of mostly transparent wings;
the fragile beat
of flight.
And then, beyond,
a blue whale
skinny-dipping
in those flocculent clouds..
or was it a shape
of nude sky
glimpsed between
the scanty under-garments
of playful gods?
...the luxury
of wondering.
Delicious Sunday vibe imagery, Worms. Love the lazy masseuse . The last image of undergarments, scandalous- I will probably see the lord’s lingerie each time I gaze skywards now. 🙂
love the playfulness of this: the blue whale took me by surprise till you fitted it in; wonderful 🙂 had to look up ‘flocculent’; knew it was a word but had forgotten what it means; seldom seen
Delicious Sunday vibe imagery, Worms. Love the lazy masseuse . The last image of undergarments, scandalous- I will probably see the lord’s lingerie each time I gaze skywards now. 🙂
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love the playfulness of this: the blue whale took me by surprise till you fitted it in; wonderful 🙂 had to look up ‘flocculent’; knew it was a word but had forgotten what it means; seldom seen
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Thanks John. 😊 I found flocculation thesaurus wise and when I looked up the definition it seemed ideal.
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the blue whale image was striking and apt 🙂
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I love the auditory images in this because it is a sense which often gets overlooked. 😊
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Thanks, Hobbo. I don’t know which you liked but those frogs… so cool!
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👍 It’s all brill!
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This is gorgeous. Those last three stanza are just so good
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Many thanks! ❤
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Wow. The last few stanzas are terrific. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Hey Bob! Haven’t seen you around these parts for a while. Welcome back. Thanks for your comment. 🙂
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Glad to be back. Just needed a little break. I very much enjoyed your poem!
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Magic use of words. Chainsaw. Metronome. Stringed chorus. It’s like a whole orchestra. 🥰
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Thanks, Misky! 🙂
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