He wonders which came first: the universe or mathematics? In the blackness of time a puddle of puzzles and we, the pupils in this unseeing eye, find the questions sticky as displaced lashes. We rub and rub… bringing on the slow implosion of galaxies toward a single grammar inexorable as starlight (sigma quotient cos pi denominator multiply hypotenuse equals equals equals) uncovering the dark matter of answers.
Written for Miz Quickly Nov 4 “write about the origin of something”
This was meant to be about something small. But the prompt immediately brought to mind an interview with a physicist I listened to in which he raised the question posed at the top of the poem. It flipped my brain right over as I had always assumed that maths and all its rules were human inventions… like soccer or the law. I really had to think quite hard about his question.
This is an amazing response. Blew my little Yorksher brain wide open!
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thank you! … i think… if exploding brains are good. LOL
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🤣🤣
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… that sounds very messy.
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That Hobbo. Be in the bog with Dauphy next. 😉
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I love this poem – the displaced lashes; unseeing eye; a single grammar (wow!) … but I would’ve asked this physicist, Why does it matter which came first?
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lol. He was on a podcast. I didn’t get the opportunity. Anyway, I’m still glad he asked. It’s good to have your brain flipped like a pancake once in a while. Thank you for your lovely comment.
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Im not a fan of flipping’ vertigo. 😂
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😆
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I love this poem. You take these big abstract questions and scientific language of mathematics and made it poetic with that image of a rogue eyelash.
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Many thanks!
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I wonder could the universe and mathematics been co-created – just look at the shell of a snail and the Fibonacci squence 🙂 🐌 The Fibonacci sequence spirals and the Golden mean
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I’m glad you like exploded brains, because mine IS! This flows awesomely from question to question. I esp like the puddle of puzzles and the unseeing pupils! Cool write. Thanks
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Thanks, Ron! 🙂
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Yeah, good question. I wonder if time was created or is a by-product of orbiting bodies (see I don’t even know how to ask the question coherently)
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it’s all pretty mind boggling!
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I so like this! esp the lashes
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Many thanks! Much appreciated.
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A wonderful poem. I love when poetry and science work together. And so many intriguing images.
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Thank you! 🙂
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this works well; I love the ‘slow implosion of galaxies toward a single grammar’ ; can it be as tidy as this? one day we will know —
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Thanks John. Do you think it’s tidy? It’s all mind boggling to me. 🙂
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Unique! I love, “and we, the pupils in this
unseeing eye, “
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Thank you! 🙂
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