my day-to-day is mainly cladding like the tie-dyed cloud scarfing last night’s moon call it misguided (my detailed examination of tree necks) but have you seen the loving press of grey rings soft and round as ghost kisses? I wish I could believe in spirits or at least in more than clock hands, their indelicate flinging of mud-balls (thunder cloaked as mischance) each morning my porcelain landscape a splintered bandana of yesterday’s colours time is a war zone these days and the answers, like my render, are cracking
Written for Miz Quickly QnV6 (use a mis- word or two)
I loved that first stanza: it’s amazing — almost stand alone —and that potent metaphor at the end —
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Thanks John. Much appreciated.
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I so completely empathise with ‘hands of clocks’ throwing stuff. We’re all under the press of someone’s hands. Nice one, W.
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Merci Misky! 🌼
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A brilliant poem, but Dauphy wants to know how you got that pig inside the tree.
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LOL! Good question, Dauphy. I asked the tree that same question. But it just said “shshshsh” so I assume it’s a secret.
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😂 Not prepared to squeal then!
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LOL
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I love that last stanza. Difficult, but apt.
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Thanks, Bob. This poem has had so many iterations. Even since pressing “publish” on WP I keep going back and amending bits. I want to say something but I”m struggling with it a bit.
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I know the feeling. I’m constantly editing and changing what I write. Good luck finding just the right words, sometimes it takes time.
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Too much warring can take anyones and anything ‘cladding’ away.
And often time seems not to help when we have ‘naked’ emotions.
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So true.
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