Some say we’re all star dust
and I get it now, how we’re set
by the exquisite geometry
of constellations
Flowers built around the houses
of exacting pentagons or
an eagle's flight feathers
their sprayed precision,
the acute explosion
of wattle blossom tendrils, or
my own hand, its splayed fingers
and the triangles between.
Water's effortless spangling of light,
or the scattered highways
from the humble nests of ants.
Its all here
in these clandestine fragments
written from the sky
Thanks John! In responding to your “Expect the Unexpected” I wrote a sentence that may become another poem and had to remove it from the comment so I could use it elsewhere. So my comment wound up being somewhat brief. Sorry about that.
You’ve captured so many geometric marvels, this lovely sky ink as you call it. So glad it speaks to you so I can see it through your words.
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I got it back! My technical prowess just soared in my own estimations! 🙂
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Huzzah!
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Thank you. I was wondering if I could incorporate the ginger bread stars my children stamped out yesterday. So many stars in my life. 🙂
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terrific ode to the meticulous architecture of nature, of which we are part 🙂 it all comes together in this one:
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Thanks John! In responding to your “Expect the Unexpected” I wrote a sentence that may become another poem and had to remove it from the comment so I could use it elsewhere. So my comment wound up being somewhat brief. Sorry about that.
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that’s okay. I appreciated what you wrote; will be interesting to see the poem that eventuates if it works out 🙂
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Yes, it’s all here! Divine write! 😍
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Many thanks, Tricia!
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Worms, I have to say that this is simply beautiful. I greatly enjoyed it.
❤
David
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Thank you! I’m glad you did. ❤
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Another stunning poem. Love it.
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Many thanks!
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This is such a fascinating subject, the geometry all around us. You’re poem wonderfully brings this to light.
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Thanks Bob. So glad people are liking it.
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I would rather you didn’t just keep reposting my work without crediting me on your site. I have been uncomfortable since the first time you did it.
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