(a cadralor)
(i) scene from a 1950s hair salon - California blue sky beehive clouds piled beside the busy scissors of a palm tree (ii) the sun is rolled out like yellow dough long arcs for cookie cutters to dance across on the feet of giants (iii) a glance from the queen her face on a coin that wealth of light when white becomes silver the exact moment (iv) a magician caught red-handed springing his bouquet this cuff of buds young and sweet (v) we three together playing music intense glow, richer than the tinsel of sun-swarm through wet leaves
Written for Lillian’s dVerse prompt “This one’s for you Bjorn” (use a line from Abba’s Dancing Queen in your poem)
I chose the line “young and sweet”
This is beautiful: I think you aced the form!
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Thanks, Ingrid! Just did an evening walk right after a storm. The light was fabulous.
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It’s beautiful here today too, but it’s morning of course!
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🙂
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I agree, outstanding work
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Many thanks, Debi!
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so do you guys have the queen’s head on your coins, then?
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Yep. The Republic referendum went royal.
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it’s bollox. Countries like Ireland have moved to a president so well.
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The PM at the time (pretty sure it was John Howard) was pro the British ties So he carefully worded it to make a Republic sound really scary. I think I was a smidgeon too young to vote then. But I remember my folks talking about it.
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Seems counter-intuitive, doesn’t it? People choosing not to choose.
Did you see Barbados just became a republic. I’m going to post it on my political post on Sunday.
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No I didn’t know about Barbados. Will keep an eye out.
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Well done! This is beautiful.
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Thank you. I had an inspiring walk.
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Amazing. I’ve done some cadralors… and I’ll probably do some more… but I actually find it difficult to think about 5 facets of one image at once.
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David
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It’s a weird form. There’s an online magazine called Gleam who specialise in cadralore. Reading their guidelines for submission, the images are to have no obvious link – they’re very strong on that point. I’m wondering if this would pass muster.
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You are a joy to read.
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Thank you, Misky. Those are lovely words.
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How do you do this with words? I could smell that after the rain storm smell. Fantastic.
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Thank you Ulle. I had a very lovely walk which had me stopping every 10 metres to take a photo or jot down an idea. The lighting after a late afternoon storm is just magical.
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Wonderful, an absolute pleasure of a treasure. 👏
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Many thanks!
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terrific imagery; catches you off guard as the best imagery does —
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Thanks John. Glad there was the odd surprise. 😊
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Very nice 👍🙂
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Many thanks
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