(i) in your paintings you found yellow tilting on ripple tips. And among pebbles where I had only seen a grey and shattered day (ii) outside Hong Kong glimmers the traffic of a million bulbs inside the tv screen blacks out somewhere a golf ball lands but in the dark square is just the gleam of our reflection and the parrot in her cage (iii) butterfly seed pods veins like rippled water this buttered light
Written for Twiglet #256 “Awake Again”
*applause*
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Thank you! 😊
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I could get all dreamy on those beautiful words.
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Many thanks. 😊
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Oooooh, are you in Hong Kong? This is a brilliant collection, by the way.
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Many thanks! Was in HK in 2002 for a few months. 🙂
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I really miss Hong Kong. It’s the most vibrant, chaotic, on the edge place I’ve ever lived. And I miss the wet markets.
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An excellent compilation, Worms.
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Many thanks! ☺
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Always welcome!
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a fertile imagination at work here 🙂
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Thanks, John. 😊
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Beautiful garden even amidst the grays. Love the spacings, like rows.
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Thank you. 😊 So interesting that you call it a garden. I re read it with a different light on in my brain. And.. that’s kind of what the poem was trying (extremely abstractly) to talk about. Turning different lights on.
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