green layers shift like water mechanism of light and dark inside we feel the whip and sway school friendships
the whip and sway
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green layers shift like water mechanism of light and dark inside we feel the whip and sway school friendships
Out of the Cave 
Beautiful. I can’t explain how this poem works, but it does. When I read “school friendships” I got chocked up. Well done!
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Thank you, Bob! That is a wonderful compliment. Thank you.
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wonderful last line; you don’t often see poems about school friendships —
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many thanks, John!
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I love the poem Worms. I don’t understand the title though.
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Huh. Very interesting comment. I guess the title begins the metaphor. But I think you’re right. Thank you for your honesty. I think it is unnecessary.
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please see my previous 🙂
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I changed the title. For interest’s sake I will record here that it was previously called “bush cubby house”
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😂 There really was no need. I was just being thick. With the help of Giggle, I now know what a bush cubby house is!
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LOL. Sorry. Didn’t realise there was a cultural barrier. My bad.
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Confusing linguistics for UK touristics! 😂
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