I glimpsed you just missing the wall imagined head cracked open like Cerberus’s grin but with a wave like wattle blossoms you skated in body breaking water, splinters, a funnel of shattered stars spilled blue burnt to colourless on pavers’ heat meanwhile ladies in lightning that galloping nightmare my suctioned heart
To be honest, I heard my kids talking about ladies in lightning. I have no idea where the phrase came from but it sang in my head and I had to use it.
It’s a great phrase, whatever it means. 🙂 Stunning lightning display yesterday!
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I must admit to not watching the lightning. It is both splendid and terrifying to me. We cooked Thit Kho To (Vietnamese Caramel Pork) for dinner and I was absorbed in that. We’ve become junkies of a website called Recipe Tin Eats. The recipes are so good! We’ve tried lamb Rogan Josh, crispy sweet and sour pork, veggie burgers, and a Thai chicken and noodle dish called Pad See Ew. All delicious and all the steps so clearly explained.
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will this cooking permeate your poems, I wonder? some dazzling images here: Cerberus’s grin knocked me sideways and that title, one of the best I’ve read this year —
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I like how you’ve woven this: the shape and the flow are magical 😊
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Thanks so much Ingrid. 🙂
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Probably just a small detail, but I love the back-and-forth shape of this piece, Worms.
❤
David
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THanks! I never know how important layout is so I appreciate the feedback
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for this particular poem, I think it makes quite a difference, personally.
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Wasn’t there a movie called Ladies in Lavender? This is the antithesis!
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LOL I’ll have to google the movie
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Three little words, my suctioned heart, they got me! 🧡
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🙂 ❤
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Yes, that caught my breath also. Great poem, Worms.
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Many thanks! Working on the titles now. You played with the titles and then were inspired to poetry? Is that the idea?
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Yes, that’s what I did. I still have a couple of more titles that I like, but unfortunately they’re not inspiring anything beyond that. 😂
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LOL I just slammed one out. It was so refreshing! I am truly learning the magic of Miz
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Hear, hear.
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🙂
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