the young man that clown lit match between thumb and forefinger pretending incomprehension as he dances swifter than blown shadows cackling like the dry boughs and the snuff of leaves his eyes caught flames of glee his pupils wick focused that lit match flickering licking fondly redly between thumb and forefinger and crackling in the dry boughs and the snuff of leaves pretending incomprehension
Written for Miz Quickly’s Dec 18 Prompt “Pretending”
Inspired by a young gentleman in South Australia who got a positive COVID test result and decided to go out clubbing that night.
It’s because of these clowns that we are still fighting this epidemic. Extremely well written.
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Thanks, Hobbo. Much appreciated.
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you’ve caught his inflammatory glee perfectly; just heard about this case; un&^^&believable
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Thanks John. What a numpty, right?!
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People will do that. It’s like thinking you have covid, but not taking the test because, if it’s confirmed, they’d need to quarantine for two weeks.
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Yeah but he had the test and got the result. Maybe he just felt like a “brain tickle” (as the Betoota Advocate has nicknamed COVID tests.).
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maybe an advocate of the herd theory?
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who knows… there’s a point at which I stop understanding other humans.
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This is excellent. The scattered formatting perfectly replicates viral spread, and the meter has a feel of slight psychosis.
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Thanks, Misky. 😊
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S.O.B.
You nail the portrayal. Thanks.
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THank you. Frustration is excellent fuel.
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