A small black feather floated
cresting a hill of warmth
landmarking invisible currents
Soft pelted, mammal night -
& evening birds whistle the moon to rise,
remind Lorca’s stars that the frogs are missing them.
Between Dvorak’s movements
a sudden spate of coughing.
Spring pollens pervade theatre noses.
The dogs are in voice
between curtains and palings
telling tales of the falling dark.
Another year drips to a close.
The ground is pocked with tiny eyelets,
footprints of a wet spring.
Oh this is just friggin marveloso! I’d seen the form named before & enjoyed the work(s) but never checked it out til just now and – WOWZA – if I were going to point someone in the “How To Write A Cadralor” direction, I’d tell them to study this THIS fine poem.
Fine x5; Love the closer. Thanks.
I’m reading the Editor’s choices; the one by Lori Howe called ‘Ripening’ is startling; thanks Worms, it’s an exciting new form; I don’t know if I can write one but I’m inspired 🙂
Oh this is just friggin marveloso! I’d seen the form named before & enjoyed the work(s) but never checked it out til just now and – WOWZA – if I were going to point someone in the “How To Write A Cadralor” direction, I’d tell them to study this THIS fine poem.
Fine x5; Love the closer. Thanks.
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Thanks so much, Ron!! That’s such a lovely comment. Hope you have an awesome Christmas!
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Brilliant! I love the line,
remind Lorca’s stars that the frogs are missing them.
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Thanks so much, Bob!! 😊
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This is just gorgeous, Worms. And “Soft pelted, mammal night” reads just like velvet.
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Thanks, Misky! 😊
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The third stanza made me chuckle, the final one is exquisite!
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Thanks Hobbo. 😊
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You are very, very welcome. 😊
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some lovely images here, esp Lorca’s stars; I’m going to have to look up cadralor :
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Many thanks! It’s an interesting form. I think this is my third attempt at it.
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okay I’m going to jump across and look it up now; who knows, I might even have a shot myself 🙂
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I’m reading the Editor’s choices; the one by Lori Howe called ‘Ripening’ is startling; thanks Worms, it’s an exciting new form; I don’t know if I can write one but I’m inspired 🙂
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Excellent. I like it too.
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Brilliant write! Thanks for sharing. Enjoy your holidays, friend! ❣️
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Thanks, Tricia! Merry Christmas!
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Dvorak – a long time ago that I heard his music (I was the nerd in highschool who liked calssical:)) Your logo/icon speaks!
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Thank you! 😊
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I love how how everybody has a different favourite line. I particularly like the line re another year drips to a close or a nose. 😄
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LOL!! Very topical!
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