clouds like scraps of rabbit pelt it’s an entrail sky dripping pink and viscous blue the horizon in swollen apocalypse
Written for Miz Quickly Jan 6 “write about a mess”
clouds like scraps of rabbit pelt it’s an entrail sky dripping pink and viscous blue the horizon in swollen apocalypse
Written for Miz Quickly Jan 6 “write about a mess”
It does feel like that sometimes at the moment
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That’s what I vet her for, she has some great metaphors! Good one, Worms! 👍
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vet? her? she? me? vet? LOL
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🤣 Vet as in check out…check out your site!
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Oh! You were responding to Suzanne?
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Oh it’s a rhyme too! I didn’t even notice! Vet her for / metaphor! So cool!
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😂What a for/tunate metaphor!
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🤣
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Sorry. I feel like I have totally ruined your kind and lovely comment. Just call it Daft Sunday and be done. 😀
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🤣 Oh, please don’t ever apologise. We never take anything very seriously, especially on Silly Sunday.
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“like scraps of rabbit pelt” – I love how you went in a totally unexpected, vivid direction with this. More visceral, but such an interesting take. You really have a way with imagery
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I love how vivid this is.
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Thanks!
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Love this exposed sky. Striking, worms.
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Thanks, K!
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