It’s storming
paparazzi flashy
herding in
a night grim as fairy-tales
perhaps I’ll dream
of Zeus’s horsemen
the drive and lash
sky crumbling to dust
beneath their thunder
or of tiny Tinkerbell
under the pear tree
cowering in the wild-lit droplets
between the black curls
of the wrought iron garden chair
the rain
like tossed sheets
is flapping at my window
rumble it out
shake … and settle
until in peace
the smells
have a chance to rise
Vivid!
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Ta!
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So many treasures in this. The sky crumbling to dust; wrought iron chairs. Just splendid.
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Thanks Misky!! ❤ Your praise means a lot
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What a terrific ending!
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Thank you! I wondered what people would make of the ending. So so glad you like it.
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I really like this, Worms; I feel the ending is tacked on; the poem is much stronger without it —
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Thanks, John. You were right. It just took me a few days to absorb it. I will save that last stanza for somewhere else.
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good choice 🙂
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