as we walk the ancients shriek feathered song of dinosaurs and in the pond, a rippled grey sky white butterflies' irregular ascent soft handed clouds blindfold the mountains i turn away from information boards extinction: the past's blunt tail a black swan dives and dives dripping from beak's red blade in my wrinkled heart a flunked certainty: I wish for a place where we can begin again
This is in response to two prompts. I have struggled and struggled to get across my feelings.
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Go Dog Go Cafe Tuesday Prompt: finish with “where we can begin again”
Your struggle isn’t evident; it seems effortless. I really like how you tied the Go Dog Go line into this. Very clever writing.
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Thanks Misky! Much appreciated!
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The middle verse of this stands out for me, ‘soft handed clouds…’ 👍
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Thanks, Hobbo. 🙂
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“extinction: the past’s blunt tail
a black swan dives and dives
dripping from beak’s red blade”
Filled with vivid imagery!
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Manythanks!
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I see only the struggle to wish things were better. The expression was well and wise.
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Thank you. That’s exactly it. 🤗
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I’ve always liked Twiglet prompts 🙂
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