we dandelions
we heard the storm coming
those first threads of rain
were real slow
reminded us of caterpillars munching
wet little noises and
the squeamishness of leaves
but then bongo practise started
like the blundering of snails
all boo and brow and beaters
foot stamp and phooey
it was waking up the river
she's been restless as tumbledown lately
always spitting and spuming
but thatβs okay
you and I, we just nodded
moonish and whathow
because
when the grey skein went
we knew we'd see
that good old frangipani sky
how did those pretty little things
get up there anyway?
Oh, this did make me smile and smile, endlessly. The ‘voice’ you’ve found in some of your poems is like a holiday.
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Aww thanks!!!!!!! π§‘π§‘π§‘
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Caterpillars munching wet little noises and the squeamishness of leaves. ππ
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Thank, Hobbo. So glad you liked that line. π
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Frangipani sky! Yum! I love the cascade of surprises in this poem.
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Thanks, K! π
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