sculling morning air the cool flap of it wet-sheet snick at my neck I pull on my hood in the east a huge candle is rising the great round nub blunt as thuggery shooting light like sky wharves & white fug ferries docked between trees bird engines, frisson & enflapment shrieks & eerie laughter wings haunted, skidding a man in a cap 5 foot seven and stocky sneakers like match scratch butt out the gravel the dog barks skitters, fences, the man laughs two short chords I shrug deeper call the dog my voice like hollow bells
This morning on 6:15am walk (earlier than usual), the dog barked at another walker. He never does that. I decided to take this small incident and try to spook it up a bit.
Good and eerie!
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Thank you! 😊
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The way your poem moves is like the candle smoke to me. Love the “ferries” and the surreal sunrise you’ve created.
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Thank you, K. 🙂
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You are just so good at turn of phrase – “bird engines, frisson & enflapment” is marvellous.
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THanks! 😀
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I love the way you string the images together in this. I also like the way you’ve set the poem out and the minimal use of punctuation works relly well. Impressive!
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Thanks Hobbo!! Such detailed feedback. So lovely, thank you!
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Very welcome.
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