A to B
expressing travel
skin like a map
ticked with freckles
she somehow glittered
with her silver Nissan ZX
and curls like suspension springs
at first I liked
the way all her vowels
issued from her top palate
and her thin legs in wide pants
crossed and dandling
without a child in sight
her black rimmed glasses
and earrings like bath plugs
pieces of a silhouette
she said we couldn’t say Jayne
Jean, Joan, June, and mostly Jine
but not Jayne
her laughter was like the way
the afternoon sun
can be a brand
arid and sharp
a blade
scraping clean her horizon
it was then, in the gleam
(like cafe lights in a long black)
I saw my own sunset gathering in her eyes
If Tarzan had been in Australia he would’ve met Jine. It would’ve been a whole different kettle of fish. They probably would’ve done their swinging from the tails of venomous snakes.
You have a great talent for storytelling, Worms.
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If Tarzan had been in Australia he would’ve met Jine. It would’ve been a whole different kettle of fish. They probably would’ve done their swinging from the tails of venomous snakes.
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Tough guys! 😂
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This is amazing, Worms. I’m pretty sure we’ve all known a Jine or two. Your description is wonderful. 👏👏
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Thanks, Hobbo. A conversation with a friend today brought her back into mind.
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It is a simply stunning word picture.
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Many thanks!! ❤
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She has to look good to make up for the coldness. Great poem, Wormsie.
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Jane’s so sparkly. Love the description.
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