Illusions
yesterday stepping toward the glass back door, I saw myself and a butterfly behind like a live earring, it rather suited me but it flew away leaving my short short hair and a face that’s less sure than ever before maybe age is just an opening of the heart and truth is the butterfly fragile and momentary
This is the 1st thing I’ve read today (I haven’t even brewed the coffee yet!) and I’m already blown away to the point which (regardless of how much coffee I drink) I’ll never feel like whatever Twiglet I might produce will be anything more than a mere shadow to this poem’s greatness.
What a phenomenally perfect image, that reflective butterfly earring.
Oy. I gotta go sip some Black Sumatra & contemplate. Thanks for the trigger.
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Awww. Thanks Ron. I love your Twiglets. I can’t wait to see what Black Sumatra inspires.
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Beautiful metaphors in that last stanza, Worms.
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Thanks Hobbo!
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Always very welcome
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I wonder if I should just get rid of the first two stanzas?
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nononononononoNO!
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It used to be 5 stanzas. I think 3 is okay. But I have the other two saved. They’re not lost.
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Good to hear!
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Just stunning, and a very good morning to you my friend.
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Thanks Misky ❣
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And Good morning!! (She says sleepily, preparing for bed) 🙂
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Sweet dreams
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Gorgeous verses and so profound! 💖👏👏
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THank you Tricia! ❤
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Welcome! 💓
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Fantastic!
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Thanks, Bob!!
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A living butterfly earring….. what an image, lovely
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Many thanks, Debi! ❤
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Stunning imagery Worms, really beautiful poem.
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Thanks Kate. ❤
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This is one of those poems that gives the reader pause for a few moments… This is beautiful in every way, and as stated by others here, the butterfly earring imagery is sublime. Such a delicate touch! 🙂
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THank you again. A moment in a reflection gifted to a poet.
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