this young soul
stoic as a viking
came last night
shutting our gate
in rain that bit
and bounced,
her head bowed
only for the shield
of hair across her neck
and I thought
I would cry violets
if I were her.
great petals
stealing colour
falling like irises.
I can picture
streaming purple,
my feet in the pooling
from my eyes
but her face
exact as porcelain
was printed with calm
and tonight
as I step outside,
the stars are flowering
in gentle garden beds
of clouds and
I feel her gravity,
gathered like moss,
in the cool air
around my shoulders.
L is the roman numeral for 50. Is the age of the narrator? I think this is a very clever way of dealing with the past and the present. Well done!
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Thanks Bob! 😊
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This is so lovely, Worms. Connected from start to finish by such a beautiful thread.
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Thank you Misky ❤
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Exquisite imagery! All the feels! ✨👏👏
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