For reasons they don’t understand the puddle by the gate never dries up and the frogs knee-deep all through the summer Hetty likes to squat tiny bottom almost in the water watching the squiggle of life, silent as first light. In a bucket in the laundry Hetty is feeding caterpillars. Nat says it’s hard to tell her fingers from the critters but Hetty’s lips are thick with peanut butter and she pops a toast crust into the bucket for good measure silent as first light. Nat says she’ll be an entomologist one day as they watch the caterpillars roll themselves into brown casings until the bucket is still. Silent as first light. Hetty moves between the knee-deep frogs with their offspring like black commas; and the quiet, brown cocoons peanut butter sandwich in her caterpillar fingers. Silent as first light. When the butterflies winkle out, drying gracefully on orange tree twigs, Nat says, “How’s that, Het?” with a huge smile. But Hetty just imitates the silent fluttering with her long eyelashes. Her brown eyes glint with a thousand future miracles silent as first light.
Written for Go Dog Go Cafe’s Tuesday Writing Prompt (22.3.22) Use the phrase “for reasons they don’t understand” in a poem
This is a super little story 👏
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Thanks, Hobbo!
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“Her brown eyes glint
with a thousand future miracles
silent as first light.”
Just beautiful! 👌❤️😁
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Many thanks, Ken!! 😊
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Such a charming story. I enjoyed reading it very much!
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Thanks Misky
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Love this one wormie 🙂
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Thanks! 🙂
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Fantastic!
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Thanks Bob. Glad you liked this one.
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Delightful ending. Love a good narrative poem, and this one is charming.
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Thanks, K. As with most of my fictional poems I have no idea where it sprang from.
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